Hopkins Opens Its First Writing Center Making the 'Write' Decisions Steve Libowitz --------------------- Editor Daniyal Zuberi has perhaps the most important writing assignment staring him in the face on a drizzly, foggy Wednesday night. But the usually sure-handed political science major isn't struggling with a term paper on political theory or American constitutional law. Those he can do pretty well. What he's wrestling with tonight is a draft of his personal statement for his law school admissions package. Suddenly, he finds himself not writing for a grade but writing for his life. And the prospect has him a little jammed up. But rather than spend torturous hours trying to break through writer's block, he heads over to Levering Hall. His destination is not E-Level, where he could perhaps lose his problem with a few cold ones amid the pulsating sounds of a medical school rock band performing at open-mike night. Instead he follows the directions drawn on a droopy, colorful sign, pointing upstairs to something never before seen at Hopkins. A writing center. There, in the bright, computer-lined Little Theatre he will spend about an hour with a trained writing consultant who will help him help himself produce the essay he wants to write. Writing centers are nothing new to American universities. They date back to the 1950s when they were mostly places where undergraduates got help with grammar and usage, running mechanical drills until they mastered the rules. But Hopkins never followed the national trend. The spark that ignited the movement toward the eventual establishment of the center was a 1992 initiative by the schools of Arts and Sciences and Engineering to require that their undergraduates take a certain number of writing-intensive courses prior to graduation in an effort to improve the quality of their writing. This year, more than 150 such courses are offered, but not without some problems. For one, as Neil Hertz, co-chair of the Committee on Undergraduate Writing, notes, the course offerings are distributed among a wide range of departments. Many of those faculty members and teaching assistants have little if any training in correcting students' prose. To partially cope with the problem, Hertz brought to campus last year a Georgetown University professor who runs that school's writing program to conduct a workshop for those teaching writing-intensive courses. The turnout was good, he says, but the project only partially resolved the problem. Last fall, Jason Yeung, then a senior in international relations, and political science graduate student Lauren Sobel began actively promoting the idea for a writing center. This past March, Hertz and the committee urged the Provost's Office to fund "a place where students can drop in when they're having difficulties with a paper and receive help from a staff of tutors made up of carefully selected graduate students and advanced undergraduates." The committee thought the timing was right to tap into the pool of young talent and energy Yeung and Sobel had gathered. In May, the provost funded both the faculty workshops and the idea for the Writing Center. The committee then turned the idea over to Steve Newman, a graduate student in the Department of English who had put together a proposal for the center with the help of Carol Burke, associate dean for academic affairs--and a former writing center director at the Naval Academy--English Department chairman Jerome Christensen and Linda Ziff, director of the department's practical composition program. Dean of Student Affairs Larry Benedict helped negotiate the Little Theatre space for Sunday through Thursday nighttime use. And the center hung out its shingle Oct. 15 to help students with any and all sorts of writing. On the third Wednesday the center is open, all three consultants on duty are engrossed in a consultation. Mathematics major Stephen Hwang is helping junior Yong-Soo Kim with a film analysis. Asjylyn Loder, a senior in the Writing Seminars, works with Steve Ho Kwok, a freshman working on a piece of short fiction. Newman is helping Daniyal Zuberi, the pre-law student who also is one of the center's 11 consultants. "I'm used to making an argument and supporting it with relevant points," Zuberi says. "This kind of writing is about me. It's very personal, and it's too important not to get help. Besides, being counseled gives me a chance to see what I'm doing well and how I can improve as a consultant." The consultants will always continue learning and improving, Newman says. Recommended by faculty, the students--considered exceptional writers as well as communicators--took a six-week, one-credit, pass/fail course Newman offered at the beginning of this semester to learn how to be a writing consultant. The three-hour-a-week course required about 100 pages of readings weekly, including the basics of grammar, style and argumentation, background information on writing centers and lots of student writing samples, which formed the basis for role playing, consultant and student. "We tried to get a sense of the kinds of issues that come up in this relationship," Loder says. "The hardest thing for me is going to be how to handle the student's paper whose position really offends me. But we're not subject consultants. We're not here to change a student's mind. We're just trying to help [the student] become a better writer." "We won't hijack a student's paper," Newman adds. Newman spent much of the formal training time inculcating the staff about the Writing Center's philosophy on how best to accomplish that basic goal. The center's emphasis is not on line-by-line grammatical corrections or editing but rather on improving a student's whole approach to writing. "We're not a fix-it shop," Newman says. "We should not be viewed as a remedial center," which is why he insists on the term consultant rather than tutor. "If you are at the end of your tether, definitely come by, but we also are here for the B+ student who wants to get to the next level of proficiency." Students coming to the center typically work on one or two items per session, such as organization, style, tense agreement and so on. The student can decide what to work on or the consultant will identify a problem area. Quite often, the session will follow the guideline of teacher comments. "Our job is not to displace the teacher," Newman says. "And we're not here to judge the appropriateness of faculty comments. They are a valuable starting point in helping a student understand where he or she might have a problem." Students are asked if the center can send a note to the faculty member informing him or her that the student has sought and received help with a writing assignment. Although past experience suggests some students might worry that their teachers will think less of them because they need help, Newman says, "I have not spoken yet to a professor who is not pleased with [the center]." Consultations last about 45 minutes, after which Newman--who is always at the center when it is open--will quietly tap the consultant's shoulder or motion to his watch, so the session can wind down. Although imposing a time limit may conjure an image of a visit to a psychiatrist rather than to a writing consultant, Newman points to research that argues working much beyond that overwhelms a student writer with ideas. "After their session, we want the student to think about the couple of areas that were focused on and work on improving them," Newman says. They can return as many as three times with the same paper, or they can bring a different one." Much of what is heard during a session is encouraging and prompts the thought process. "That's a judgment call" ... "What are you trying to say here? ... What do you mean by that?" ... "Where do you want to go with this?" Loder says she is really enjoying the process, even at 10:30 at night, after a long day of classes and studying for midterms. "I like writing, and I think the center is a valuable resource because it can make writing less difficult for others who don't like it as much." The student writers seem to like it too. Although open less than a month, student evaluations--returned after each consultation--are giving Newman a sense that he and his staff are heading in the right direction. "[The consultant] gave me suggestions but did not impose and force me to say something I did not want ... I wish this was here my freshman year," read one evaluation. "I have grown more aware of what to look for in a literary piece when reading it," read another. The center makes no claims that it can improve a student's grade. But that's not how Newman and the administration intend to evaluate the center's performance. Student satisfaction is, and will likely remain, the primary criterion for the center's continuation. "Our primary goal is to help raise students' awareness about their writing and to help them think more and be more critical about it," Newman says. "If we can do that, we'll have succeeded." ----------------------------------------------------------------- The Writing Center is located in the Little Theatre on the second floor of Levering Hall on the Homewood campus. Students can stop by, or make an appointment, for consultations from 7 to 10 p.m. Sundays, Mondays and Tuesdays and 9 p.m. to midnight Wednesdays and Thursdays. For more information, or to schedule an appointment, call (410) 516-4258. -----------------------------------------------------------------